Saturday, October 29, 2005

The Challenge

Matthew Lickona at God'sbody has proffered the challenge of a six word story, ala Ernest Hemingway's famous:

"For sale: baby shoes, never used."

I don't usually go in for writing stories, but I thought I would try.

She spoke. He listened. They loved.

What do you think? Too preachy?



Gashwin said...

A bit radical. He listened? Really? :-)

angelmeg said...

Well, perhaps it does come under the heading of fantasy more than reality.


Anonymous said...

that's not nice. i, a husband, listen often. i listen to my stomach, i listen to the ball game, i listen to my testosterone...